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Your Resume Is Probably Fine. That’s the Problem.

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Claire Matson Student Contributor, University of California - Davis
This article is written by a student writer from the Her Campus at UCD chapter and does not reflect the views of Her Campus.

Your resume is inherently okay, but somewhere between “use action verbs” and “keep it professional,” most resumes lose all personality — and with it, anything that makes them memorable. Here are some tips to be sharp and noticeable to employers and make your resume unique.

1. Stop writing your resume like a job description

Most resumes sound like they were copied straight from a job listing. That’s usually why they get ignored.

Instead of merely listing your duties, write what the job actually looked like. What you were doing, what the setting was, under what circumstances? The goal is to make the hiring team picture you doing the work, not just skimming a list of responsibilities.

Instead of writing “Responsible for customer service and cash handling,” write something that sounds lived-in and real, like “Handled high-volume morning rushes while managing the register, drink orders, and customer questions.” That gives the reader a picture instead of a label.

2. Add one detail that makes each role feel real.

The difference between the forgettable resumes and the memorable ones is usually the small details.

That could be the pace, the environment, the pressure or the context. Something that makes your experience feel specific instead of interchangeable. That might be the setting, the pace, the conditions or the level of responsibility. “Worked in a coffee shop” is forgettable. “Opened and helped run a busy coffee shop during peak tourist mornings” is more vivid. It gives context, and context makes experience feel more impressive.

If someone could swap your bullet point onto anyone else’s resume, it’s probably too generic.

3. Quantify, quantiFY, QUANTIFY. But don’t overdo it.

Use numbers only when they add meaning.

You don’t need to quantify everything. You just need to quantify the right things.

Numbers should show scale, speed or impact. If they don’t make the experience sound more demanding or more impressive, they’re just filler.

For example, “Managed 100+ customers during rush periods” tells me something. “Answered 12 emails a day” usually does not. The point is not to cram in statistics wherever you can. The point is to use numbers where they sharpen the picture and make you look good.

4. Show what you can handle (don’t say it)

A strong resume does more than just list tasks; it signals what kind of situations you can be trusted in. This matters a lot for students because employers are often trying to figure out whether you can handle pressure, work independently, stay organized, learn new things or adapt quickly.

That means your bullet points should quietly answer questions like: Can this person work in fast conditions? Can they handle physical work? Can they manage responsibility without constant supervision?

You do not have to say, “I am dependable” or “I can work hard.” You can show it by writing things like “Independently managed opening shift procedures such as…” or “Collected field data in hot, dry conditions with minimal supervision.”

That says much more than any personality word ever could.

5. Make your resume match the job

One of the smartest things you can do is pay attention to the language in the job posting and reflect it back naturally. Not by pasting it word for word, but by translating your own experience into terms that connect with what they want.

Pay attention to the language employers use and reflect it back naturally in your own experience. You’re not trying to sound like them. You’re making it easy for them to see the connection. If a posting says they want someone with “data collection experience,” and you have done field surveys, lab work or record-keeping, use that phrase somewhere honestly. If they emphasize communication, think about where your experience shows that.

6. Your experience isn’t constrained to careers.

Many people minimize themselves by not considering all aspects of their experience. Resumes are your one opportunity to showcase yourself and your skills. Sit and think for a while about everything you have done.

Have you volunteered anywhere? When? What did you do?

Did you help your roommate put together a new bar cart from IKEA? What tools did you use? What did you learn that could be valuable to the job you are looking at? Make note.

Did you table for a club (even if you only did it once)? Who did you meet? Did you get to speak with people from different backgrounds? What details did you have to organize at the table? Did you help people sign up to join the club or an event?

Thinking about these small things can help you build a Skills section that is thorough and impressive. You can also flesh out your volunteering and extracurricular activities to showcase skills that you may not have learned working as a barista at Peet’s or analyzing samples in a lab.

7. Treat “Ordinary” Jobs like a real experience.

A lot of students undersell their experience because it does not feel fancy enough. Retail, food service, ranch work, campus jobs, childcare, internships that were messy and unglamorous, all of that can be strong resume material if you write it well.

The issue is usually not the job itself. It is the framing. Jobs that seem ordinary often involve time management, judgment, responsibility, communication, and stamina. Those are real skills. They just need to be written in a way that captures them.

A good resume does not pretend every job was perfect and wonderful. It just knows how to pull out what mattered.

8. Lead with your strongest line, not your first thought.

No one is reading your resume carefully the first time. They’re typically skimming.

That means your strongest, most relevant bullet should always come first under each role. Don’t bury your best experience halfway down under a line that doesn’t say much about you. Lead with it.

This goes for whether or not you want to put your skills, work experience, extracurriculars, or volunteering first on the page. Think honestly about the job, and about which of those sections makes the boldest, most qualified impression. Then put that at the top of the page.

Getting over the struggle

Resumes can be difficult to write. Revising your resume every time you want to apply somewhere gets old really quickly. It’s important to put your best effort forth, so make it fun. Try writing something you are excited to read. If you were the employer, would you be excited about you? If not, what can you do to make your resume convey that excitement? What else have you done that proves you are qualified (even if you still have a lot to learn)? Are there skills you can go attain or things you can do to be proactive about your future? Go do them and put them on your ongoing list of activities and skills.

The bottom line: Brag about your life. When you really sit down and ponder the things you have accomplished, big or small, I guarantee you there are valuable skills you have learned. Don’t be afraid to showcase them. Make yourself proud. You’ve got this.

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